Part1-- Jennifer (YiMing)Xu--Go against and keep trying!
From my perspective, American Dream would be that people try to work for what they want to do without considering about other people’s prejudice and pressure from public opinions.💪💪💪💪😁😀 The public would consider that women do not have high enough status to be the president of the country because they always have bias of women.😐😐😖 When it was January in 2019, Harris who is an African Democrats 👍👍👍would take part in 2020 presidential campaign. She said “for the people” 👀👍👍to show her dream would be that she wanted to go against racists. She ignored the prejudice 😃😃😃against women and kept 😊💪taking part in the campaign even there would be a demonstrator who robbed her of her microphone during her speech. Under a strong pressure 😔😔😔😣that women did not have a high 😨😨status, she still wanted to work for the people and work against the racists who would not benefit the people and do harmful things to make America not develop in a normal way. This showed the realistic American Dream because she had the opportunity to achieve the dream. The desire for freedom and equality would be realistic because the society would always want to have these.
Harris was talking to the public!
“For the people!!!!"
When I was 16, I took place in school’s sports meeting. I never 😞😟took part in running matches so any other classmates in my class would not believe that I could have a great consequence.😬😃😁😀😄 They talked about me that I would lose the match without any trust. I felt sad however I wanted to use my action to convince them that I can do that. I tried my best and I got the third. All of them would be amazing and they changed their minds. If people can keep 👍💪💪doing what they want and do not care about other people’s negative thoughts, they would get success and get what they want.
“For the people!!!!"
When I was 16, I took place in school’s sports meeting. I never 😞😟took part in running matches so any other classmates in my class would not believe that I could have a great consequence.😬😃😁😀😄 They talked about me that I would lose the match without any trust. I felt sad however I wanted to use my action to convince them that I can do that. I tried my best and I got the third. All of them would be amazing and they changed their minds. If people can keep 👍💪💪doing what they want and do not care about other people’s negative thoughts, they would get success and get what they want.
Hi, my sweet girl. This is Susie, the cutest girl in the world. I made some comments on your blog Part 1. I have to say that I love your idea very much. You're mainly talking about gender stereotype and the media support is appropriate. You add a lot of Emoji expressions during writing, which are at the end of every key sentence. It's very good that you mark similar keywords with the same color, which makes your blog format very neat and can better see the relationship between each key point. For example, you add a painful emoji to the sentence "discrimination against women". Through this emoji, I can also see your thoughts on this event. You labeled the image you put on your blog, which I didn't see when I was browsing many people's blogs, this is very good, I can quickly identify the image mainly talking about. However, there are also some things that have puzzled me. For example, when you contact your personal experience, I don't feel the connection with your American dream and media examples, is not obvious. I think you can focus on the fact that boys don't believe you will get good grades because of the stereotype of girls. In this way, the connection between your example and the American dream will be more appropriate. At the same time, when you say the American dream is realistic, it's because Harris has the chance to realize it. I hope you'll be more focused on why her American dream is real, even when the protesters stole her microphone. I think you can say that the American dream is realistic because women can already run for president. Finally, there are some things that need to be improved. The overall style is a little monotonous. You can add more pictures to add some fun. It will be more attractive. The key words you drew "all for people" are not well reflected in your blog. You can say that you choose to compete because you want to prove to others that girls can also have good talent in running. Generally, I think it's very good. I can see that you spent a lot of time thinking about the topic of this blog. I like it very much!
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