Part1 -- Cynthia (Xinhua) Tian -- Dream is made of dreams


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Dream is Made of Dreams

       American dream needs to be changed to the collection of individuals’ dreams👥 instead of only working hard💦💦💦, I believe individuals should have different ways to face new opportunities🎫 and challenges⚡ due to different life state, otherwise American dream would only be a myth🙅.

"Here, a little hard working can take everyone from rags to riches."
The key aspect of this argument is every American is infused with the same American dream, the truth💥💥 is that people should use their different dreams to build American dream. The most important part in American dream is financial💸economy which also influence me a lot. I think that the most important part in American dream is financial economy which the financial institutions🏢 are NOT aware of the wealth gap, the credit rules formulated by the government are NOT applicable to people in different economic conditions. The financial institutions require good credit or money to open a bank 🏦account, it is a conflict that poor people need to get a loan to have money which needs credit to prove by money.

The inequalities of bank policy
As shown in the video, the Asian boy says😵😵, “in order to build credit, I need a credit card, but I can’t get a credit card unless I have great credit?”, getting a loan should become a way to help poor people who work hard to succeed🎉, but it seems to become their obstacles. The different lifestyles of humans under class division deserve better policies to make life easier. For instance, as an international student📌, I need to pay ten times😱 of the tuition that local students pay, this means only if your family has the ability to support you, you could get better education📕📕 so that the opportunities could easier to be found.

In addition, American dream becomes nightmare because discrimination comes from the gap⛏ between rich and poor and is buried under the American dream💢. The rich could not understand the poor’s requirements because the rich use their perspectives to observe⛓ the world. Among the video, the Asian boy says, “Curse this vicious cycle!”, while the rich woman says, “He seems lazy.”, it is ironic that the rich cannot understand the situation of the poor that they work hard and they are lack of money, in their view, losing items is not important⛑, because they have money to buy a new one. 


For me,  my 👪family burden will become less because there will be an international student subsidy to support me. It is true that a dream💤💤 could never come true, but if people keep awake and combining💪💪 American dream with their own dreams the big American dream will come true🙌🙌.

https://www.youtube.com/watchv=ydca1wzlheg&list=PL8Por8PCcaqlJ3wEC35h_QfdUWCKYk7aC&index=6&t=0s

Comments

  1. Cici's personal comment for Cynthia's Part 1:
    Hi, Cynthia. Surprise! Your funny and intelligent friend Cici is coming to your blog. I really like your speaking style and structure, which is beautiful and makes me feel relaxed when reading it. Also, the words that you highlight mention me to recognize your main idea clearly, and the idea-"dreams is made of dreams" attracts me a lot, which is very fun and interesting.
    However, the points which you need to fix and improve is to talk more about your personal experience about the American Dream from your own definition, and combine it to your own opinion in a detailed way. Besides, I think that you can focus more on the connections between your example and your view, to show how people in different class has different American dreams and explain it in a more specific way.
    All in all, it looks good in general. By the way, paying more attention on grammar practice is benefit for you, hahah! Keep fighting !!!

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